Wednesday, May 20, 2015

A really, really mean poem.

You call me beautiful, is that all you care about?
You say I’m intelligent, but you don’t really care
Why should you? Infuriating. It’s more than I can bare
You give me compliments that don’t really turn out
Somehow I don’t see how seeing me makes you doubt
After all, you are walking on a thin line, on air
You write to me, waiting forever like a giant panda bear
For the right road, you might just want to reroute  
Now carefully, harmlessly vow courtesy and how
Ever now endeavor to bow, be clever
With such a line, myth touches the love pine
Beauty is much adored, duty explored nonesuch
However willing never fulfilling whomsoever filling
Whatever needs reminding, a favor bleeds whining.

j.h.

4 comments:

Snarky Pants said...

I'm wondering what this is a response to...

j.h said...
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Unknown said...

I like it. I dunno why, but I like it.

Unknown said...

When I heard this in Socratic, it was the freaking best thing I'd heard all day. I snapped in the back, if you didn't hear me; Bravo Jackie, Bravo.